The contestants were given a few topics out of which one was Nature... Most of them came out with brilliant pieces of poetry. As for mine, it is no way near brilliant, but
1. it doesn't make sense
2. will surely make you laugh...
So here it goes:-
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MOTHER NATURE !!!
I know, I know... You must not have read as ridiculous a poem as this!
I look up the sky and see the blue clouds,
A feeling which makes me sing aloud,
A feeling which lifts me to the air,
A feeling strange yet similar to my mother's care.
I look around and see the green trees,
Long for my mother's embrace which I miss,
But the soothing green make me calm,
And suddenly I feel alarmed-
A large spider falls on my shoulder,
Scared, I stumble upon a boulder.
I break my leg and crack my head,
Feeling that I would be better of dead.
But Mother Nature at once comes alive,
A little cute bird onto my side dives,
And suddenly I feel alive,
Never so in my entire life.
***************************************************A feeling which makes me sing aloud,
A feeling which lifts me to the air,
A feeling strange yet similar to my mother's care.
I look around and see the green trees,
Long for my mother's embrace which I miss,
But the soothing green make me calm,
And suddenly I feel alarmed-
A large spider falls on my shoulder,
Scared, I stumble upon a boulder.
I break my leg and crack my head,
Feeling that I would be better of dead.
But Mother Nature at once comes alive,
A little cute bird onto my side dives,
And suddenly I feel alive,
Never so in my entire life.
I know, I know... You must not have read as ridiculous a poem as this!
4 comments:
hey it was not that bad that someone will laugh..
I think it was a nice attempt..as I said earlier also that u shud write more often. :)
hey tht was a nice one.. u write well!!! it was quite funny and innocent... i think u still hav a kid inside you!! thts a good thing... world would be a better place if ppl were lyk tht!
Hey!
@ preposterous girl:
I totally love your writings. Believe me I am actually trying to write more often. I have a lot of ideas which I am not getting enough time to pen down, or rather type down!
@ Parv Kaushik:
Thanks! I like!! I love your blogs too...
kind of innocent
couldnt think of title but had few feelings
ek duniya chand ke paar kahin
jahan pe din ho raat wahin
likhu roz main raet pe naam jiska
usko pata mera naam nahin.......
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